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Community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree.

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It is opined that public
service
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 should be incorporated into the secondary school syllabus. I completely agreed that community
service
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 will benefit both the
students
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 and
society
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 in the long run. There are myriad
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reasons an unpaid
service
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 as part of the school curriculum is beneficial to the future of a country.
Firstly
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, it prepares
students
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 to learn how to become responsible in
society
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. In order words, they get used to passionately contributing to the growth of their environment when they participate in activities like cleaning, mowing grasses etc.
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, they will learn to get things done in teamwork, and
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 prepares them ahead for future challenges, especially during their career. A survey by the Middle-east workplace commission states, professionals who attended unpaid
services
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 during their time in college, have more confidence to relate with colleagues in their career compared to their counterparts who did not participate in
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, community
services
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 can help build bonds among inhabitants in
society
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.
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, social relation grows between the unpaid workers and the beneficiaries in an environment due to these free
services
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 rendered by other citizens.
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 establishes love among citizens which in turn makes a peaceful country.
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, environmental maintenance could be achieved when there is a shortage of workers for these types of
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 due to low pay.
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 is common in African schools, where
students
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 were given cutlasses and hoes to cut the grass around the school environment. In summary, adding unpaid public
service
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 to
students
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' academic calendars will not only bolster their confidence to succeed in life but will
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 help the government to achieve a stable and peaceful
society
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.
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