Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?

Now, we live in a society where technology plays an important role in our daily and even the world. And I absolutely agree with
this
statement. By using modern scientific tools, it certainly brings huge adventages to humanity.
First
of all, space research is able to observe almost the problem of the earth, Typically, it has contributed to solving climate change in recently years. After taking the information from satellites, the scientists start analising the data and notifying the goverment to come up with the appropriate solution to minimize the aftermath of climate change
such
as: drought, flood, gobal warming,...
Moreover
, it
also
help people prevent from strange objects can collide with the earth. Universe research not only supports for global issues, but
also
handle with human life. Weather forecast has assisted people daily. I believe that watching weather forecast has become everyone's habbit all over the world cause people could be know when they should take an umbrella.
Additionally
, 27/09/2022, the weather forecast made great contribute to foresight of storm which named Noru, ocurr in central area of Vietnam. it causes many material damage but luckly, no one die. For the
last
reason, we are
also
enjoyed the picturesque phenomenon: aurora, meteor,... By way of conclusion, i think investing in extraterrestrial research is reasonable for their adventages.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • justifiable
  • vast sums of money
  • satellite communications
  • economic benefits
  • climate change
  • atmospheric changes
  • global issues
  • humanitarian needs
  • STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • colonization
  • catastrophic events
  • space exploration
  • innovations
  • job creation
  • boosting the economy
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