Some people think children should study at school and other think they should study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most parents are in favour of letting their
children
study at
home
rather than sending them to universities. In my point of
view
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I strongly disagree that education can take place at
home
. I will discuss why I am not in favour of
this
in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, education inside the
home
is not a big help in improving our
children
's capacity to understand the topic. If it is not
face-to-face
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discussion with their teacher it can lead to deprivement of knowledge and information that they should about to learn.
For example
using gadgets
such
as mobiles, laptops,
iPad
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during their studies may result in a lot of disruptions.
Students
can easily browse other websites
instead
of listening to their online classes.
Therefore
, the attentiveness of
students
is affected.
In addition
, I will consider some of the families with economic problems in which they cannot support their
children
to buy gadgets and other learning materials to be used at
home
.
For example
, purchasing
an
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Internet is too expensive if they will use it every day. Unlike attending personally school they can spend less on these things.
Furthermore
, I watched the news that some
students
tend to do suicide if they cannot catch up with the topics. So lack of personal counselling by the professor could lead to depression in some
students
. To sum up, it is still better for me to send my
children
to school or universities. It will help them a lot to focus more and adapt to the society inside the school, and
also
to lessen the expenses of parents. So I totally disagree with the conversation that
students
should to studies at
home
.
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