Buying things on the internet, such as groceries, books and air tickets is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping this way outweigh the disadvantages.

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is based upon
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enthusiast to be more valuable than any artist. I believe
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is progressing. The
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people
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to maintain
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stability, and help the
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to prosper.
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is basically a tool that helps in discovering new things or creating new things to make life easier.
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are so busy with their life and career that they hardly have time to listen to
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or watch
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thing in the
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after
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can survive without
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, but they will still need
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for their survival.
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of water resources,
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are using water purifiers to clean up
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and make it safe for drinking. A feat, which can only be achieved by
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, and not by any form of art.
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and Engineers more valuable than artists.
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, in comparison with
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, technical stuff still holds the higher ground. But that's not true
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listen to
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, play video games, etc. To ease
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their mind from all stress and find some relief. So even though
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important
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will always have its place. So in my opinion, even though
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on the wheel of
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still important as it helps the person to feel relaxed so that they can focus on their job well.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • E-commerce
  • Convenience
  • Time-saving
  • Variety
  • Accessibility
  • Competitive pricing
  • Discounts
  • Cost-effective
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon footprint
  • Security risk
  • Data breach
  • Product quality
  • Consumer behavior
  • Physical inspection
  • Returns policy
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