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Modern technology is being used more and more in different aspects of our live, such as education. Do the advantages of using technology as an educational tool outweigh its disadvantages?

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nowadays, new inventions of
technology
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 being used
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 increasing day by day in our life. the trend's benefit
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 more than a drawback.
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this
 essay outline the advantages and disadvantages of
technology
.
firstly
, I would like to highlight the major pro of
technology
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 main role in our
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lives
life
lifes
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.
such
 as
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 online classes on laptops and computers
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using
technology
.many students all around the world
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 taking
online
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 class by using zoom.
for instance
, recently in ,covid 100% public is taking
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online
class
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classes
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 by utilising
technology
 in the modern.
moreover
, there are many benefits of using
technology
 in our studies and
technology
 make life easy for
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student as they can take help from google. in
modern
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 all the students
whoever
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 didn't anything about
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their
theirr
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their
 courses so
they
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can take data from
the
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different websites.
for example
, while I'm getting prepared for the IELTS exam so I'm don't aware of anything about
IELTS
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the IELTS
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 exam but
i
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 easily get to know about that by using google.
however
, there are so many pros doesn't mean there is no drawback .althrough, there are some drawbacks as well to using
technology
 in terms of education .because many websites give the wrong tools to the student.to illustrate, my friend one of the websites of IELTS and he get scammed by that website.
furthermore
, one more reason disadvantage of having
technology
 is coming in education.children are getting
lrazy
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crazy
lazy
 by using
technology
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int
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 the modern period. to sum up, in modern times
technology
 is popular in different
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 of life and special
in
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educational
purpose
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. there are more pros rather than having corns
such
 as highlighting some of the advantages of taking
an online classes
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online classes
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 and easily getting help from google.
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