In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case. Is it a positive or negative development

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Nowadays, attires worn in the western world have replaced our indigenous dresses.
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is caused by the lack of education on cultural values and the low prices of these
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believe that
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is a negative development as valuable traditions are lost. There are some reasons for the increase in wearing western
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. One of them is the knowledge deficit on the importance of traditional attires.
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, when individuals are not educated on the types of traditional outfits they have, they will end up sticking to only the westernised dresses they see.
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, the aso-oke in Nigeria can be worn for weddings
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of the English suit attire.
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, the cheap prices of western
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make them more attractive and pocket-friendly. Most of the items of clothing worn in the west are cheaper when compared to their native alternatives. I consider the
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wearing of western
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a negative development because it leads to the loss of useful elements of culture. By
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I mean after a period of not wearing traditional outfits,
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part of culture begins to diminish as people who are keepers of tradition die without any means of accessing
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information.
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, traditional outfits
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as adire might go into extinction as the younger ones are not being taught how to produce them. In conclusion, jeans, suits and other
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of the west are replacing our local fabrics because of inadequate knowledge and their lower prices. I believe
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is a negative development because it leads to the loss of an essential part of the culture.
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