Technology allows food to be produced in greater quantities at lower prices. Some people believe this is a positive development, while others feel that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
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advancement
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the advancement
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effect
technology
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technological
food
producing
.
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production
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the beginning, poverty is Change the preposition
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. Today some countries like China, produce Correct your spelling
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food
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low cost and large Change preposition
at
amount
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amounts
such
rice
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as rice
eggs
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and eggs
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at
cheap
cost. The other reason is, farming Correct article usage
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environment
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be decreased
decrease
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decreased
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artificial producing better than natural food
growing.
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humans
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scientists
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the scientists
this
is a bad result of food
technology and they think people
should live in natural
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a natural
previous
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in previous
era
. The other thing is, farming is the main income of Fix the agreement mistake
eras
rural
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for rural
people
. If decrease the value of natural growing
in the market, farmers will be lost their jobs.
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time-saving
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the risk
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threat
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income
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the income
people
. Personally
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food
producing not fair because of
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