Technology allows food to be produced in greater quantities at lower prices. Some people believe this is a positive development, while others feel that the change is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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globalization,
world
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the world
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has changed a lot.
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of changes can be seen in every field across
advancement
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the advancement
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of technology.
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this
essay, will discuss
about
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the
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affect
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effect
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of
technology
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technological
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advancement on
food
producing
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production
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.
At
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the beginning, poverty is
the
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major issue facing worldwide. Due to
this
problem, a lot of children have been detected with malnutrition in some countries
such
as Somalia,
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and Ithiopea
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Ithiopea
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Ethiopia
. Today some countries like China, produce
food
with
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at
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low cost and large
amount
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amounts
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using new techniques and they are providing things
such
rice
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as rice
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,
eggs
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and eggs
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with
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at
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cheap
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a cheap
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cost. The other reason is, farming
take
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a long time to give products. As well
as
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with the
environment
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changes productivity may
be
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be decreased
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decrease
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decreased
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.
Therefore
artificial producing better than natural
food
growing.
However
, today
people
are suffering
non-communicable
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from non-communicable
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diseases. As an example, without age difference
human
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humans
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have
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diabetes
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, hypertension and carcinoma. In Apeksha Hospital maharagama
have
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been increasing
number
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the number
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of patients day by day. Some
of
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scientists
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the scientists
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believe
this
is a bad result of
food
technology and they think
people
should live in
natural
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a natural
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way as
previous
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in previous
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era
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. The other thing is, farming is the main income of
rural
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for rural
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people
. If decrease the value of natural
growing
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in the market, farmers will be lost their jobs. In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages. The positives are,
this
is the one of
solution
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solutions
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for poverty among developing countries. The other one is
,
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time saving
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and cheap thing.
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there are some negatives
such
as
risk
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the risk
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for non-communicable diseases and a
thread
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threat
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for
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to
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income
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the income
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of rural
people
.
Personally
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,Personally
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I believe artificial
food
producing not fair because
of
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health is worth
than
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more than
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money.
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