some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeghter. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There have been different kinds of emotions in

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senses since the

first

time a person heard

melody

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a melody

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or a

song

. These feelings can be anxiety, sadness , happiness or something else, which usually seem to be in the same form among different societies. I totally agree that

music

can bring various cultures and ages together just by listening to a special

song

In the continue, I would explain my reasons

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this

argument.

First

of all, I believe that

music

is like a unique language all over the

world

, that every person gets a feeling while hearing a

song

.

Although

the feelings might vary, most public feel the same style when a

song

is played.

For instance

, the national anthem of every country creates a sense of

proudness

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inside its own people country community. By the way, to enjoy a certain kind of

music

, there is no need to learn anything, and human sensations are provoking while

music

is playing instinctively.

Moreover

, local

music

can show the cultural side of their public origin by using domestic instruments and tools or even poems in their songs.

Thus

other folks from overseas can be introduced through their local

music

.

Additionally

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it has been seen that

community

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communities

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from different countries sing a special

song

at the same time while they have gathered to celebrate a ceremony without considering their ages or nationalities.

For example

, the soccer

World

Cup opening ceremony

song

which is held every four years is sung by various folks and their singers from different countries. To sum up, In spite of the fact that

music

is like a

unit

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language among all people, there is no specific learning needed to understand

this

language.

Also

,

music

from a far part of

world

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is been listened

in

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every corner of the

world

and it is available for almost everyone.

Therefore

I agree that it can be a great idea of consolidating nations from different backgrounds around the earth