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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? How can its popularity be increased?

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Asking for directions 1.You want to buy some bread but you don’t know how to get to the bakery. What does you say when you want to get to to the bakery? Key:
Excuse
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 me.Can you tell me the
way
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 to the bakery? 2.You are lost something and you want to go to the
police
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station
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 to ask for help. What does you say when you want to get to to the
police
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station
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? Key:
Excuse
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 me.Can you tell me the
way
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 to the
police
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station
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?
Excuse
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 me. Would you please show me the
way
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 to the nearest
police
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station
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? 3.Look at the map and help the man/ woman how to get to Ridgeview Theater? (You are at the City Museum.) Key: Go along Moon Street to Rushmore Avenue and turn left. You'll see Ridgeview Theater on your right. 4.You want to go to the convenience store to buy food and drinks but you do not know how to use the fastest mean of transportation to get there. What does you say when you want to know the fastest transportation to get the place you need? Key: What's the fastest
way
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 to get to the convenience store from my hotel, here,
this
Linking Words
 bus stop….? 5.Look at the map and help the man/ woman how to get to Rich library? (You are at the City Museum.) Go along Moon Street to Tenth Avenue and turn left. You'll see Rich library on your left. 6.You want to go to the beauty salon to get a haircut but you do not know whether there is a beauty salon or not. What does you say? Key:
Excuse
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 me. Is there a beauty salon near here?
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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