Some think that residents should responsible for keeping their areas clean and tidy, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

There are few
people
who argue that citizens are responsible to keep their
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neat and clean. While
,
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some of them believe that it is only the responsibility of the
government
. Making the
environment
clean is the equal
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of both the parties i.e. the residents of the
area
as well as the
government
. I
also
agree with the foremost statement that being the inhabitant of
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any residential
area
, keeping the
area
should be the priority.
Similarly
,
government
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should play their roles to maintain the cleanliness of all the areas of the country. In many Household areas, there could be some
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problems rises on
daily
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basis that can
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by the local
people
to maintain the hygiene of the
area
. For
instances
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, standing rainwater on roads, or blocked drains can be cleaned by the municipality of the
neighboring
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area
. In South California,
people
of small villages and residential buildings,
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arrange
monthly
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meeting
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people
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issues to establish
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good atmospheric conditions for the locals.
Similarly
, the role of
government
is equally significant for
the
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clean
environment
. There are various issues that can only be resolved by higher
government
officials
for example
reconstruction of roads
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or
repairing
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of gas or waterlines within the localities. These
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of issues will create a great impact on
householders
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physical
physcial
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physical
and mental health as well as on the atmospheric conditions, to keep the
area
fit for humans, spontaneous actions are needed by the
government
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Times newspaper that
US
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launched a local resident portal for different areas of the state that badly needs
government
attention for maintaining
the
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clear
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and hygienic
environment
. To sum up, I agree with both the statements
thats
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that
that's
both
government
and tenants should take a charge for
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a cleared
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and neat
environment
.
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