Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In life people sometimes find themselves dealing with bad

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,and they tend to react differently to those problems .now,while

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believed by many that these

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should be coped with and accepted ,some support the opinion that it is best for them to take advantage of that situation and try to develop and improve.I stand by the latter opinion and the following paragraph will illustrate

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. On one hand,accepting one's situation should be of course encouraged because by not accepting or tolerating, that person can develop severe anxiety and even depression .

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, bad

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develop many negative feelings

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as uncertainty,low self-esteem and doubting oneself

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of regrets and anger .going through a difficult time is not easy ,and that what make supporting groups a great tool people can be enrolled in to learn how to adapt.

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while adapting is important to avoid

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consequences ,people need to become strong and move on .in my perspective ,

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is very important if they

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to

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their goals.it does require a certain level of strength ,

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,with some motives and encouragement they will be able to overcome

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and even turn

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into an opportunity to become better,

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take someone who

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didn't

get a job as an example ,

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of weeping and crying over

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,k he can take

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as an opportunity to take courses,workshop,and gain more certificates and get an even better job than the one he had lost it. in conclusion,

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adapting and accepting losses is crucial to our mental health, it is

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vital that we try to make the most out of bad

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and take them as a chance to develop.