You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter complaining about this to the landlord. In your letter: explain the situation describe why it bothers you suggest a solution Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr / Ms _____________,

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Dear Ms Leanne, I am writing
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letter to complain to the new neighbour from unit 10 who moved in
last
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month that having loud parties every two to three times a week. It affected me so much, especially in the nighttime. I have been living here that a year or so, but I never had any problems with other neighbours.The new neighbour was good in the
first
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week, he is so a warm and helpful person. But starting from the
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couple of weeks, he invited some of his friends to come over to visit and made a lot of noise in the nighttime. Other neighbours and I are frustrated with them. I need to work in the early morning every day, their noises make me could not have a good sleep. I tried to put my headphone on, but it does not help me. I feel a lack of sleep every time when they have loud parties. The reason why I am writing
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letter to you is that had enough of them. The suggestion is that you should talk you your tenant and tell him about our feelings and situation, and
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if possible put the volume down after 9:30pm on weekdays and 10pm on weekends. I understand that having a party is not a problem, but if affected by others that would be a big problem. Thank you for your patience in reading
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letter. I am looking forward to hearing back as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, YUMI
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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