The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal the health-related issues. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the education curriculum. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Obese is one of the causes of chronic illnesses,

such

as heart diseases , hypertension, diabetes and many more.It is really essential to teach people how being overweight affect health by including the subject in the education curriculum in schools .

Learners

will get more information on how obesity

affect

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their lives

this

can be done

theoratically

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theoretically

by just learning in class particularly on ways and food to avoid eating , it can

also

be done practically by going for physical exercises like hiking, playing sport or going to the gym

this

will be done during a stipulated time period

that is

dedicated to physical education subject. It is proven that most young children listen to their educators more than their parents at home, it will be of help if educators in school suggest the kind of healthy food to be included in the

learners

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lunch boxes particularly preschool

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and primary level

learners

In conclusion, by adding the health curriculum to the educational system the initiative will most likely eliminate obesity and all kinds of diseases attached to it, which normally put a strain on hospitals and clinics.