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Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads. Do you agree? What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety?

#movies #car #chases #thrill #fun #accidents #roads #youth #road #safety
Nowadays, some people are thought that the film industry has developed rapidly as a consequence
car
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developing
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also
. It means that
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 industry setting up new standards
of
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car
chases
.
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, it could affect
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other people
in
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 motorways. Generally, I agree with
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 statement and I will try to find ways out.
First
 of all, it starts
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 teenagers, who
does
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 not recognize how road crashes can be dangerous and
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tends to watch movies with cruelty including
car
chases
. Due to movies, teenagers in most cases forget about safety. In fact,
however
, the most of
car
 crashes in
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 2 years were between ages 16 and 25.
As a result
 50% of them with fatal outcomes.
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, a group of teenagers in Texas started a race with cops
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 the end 2 of them
in
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 hospital others in jail. To solve
this
 issue,
government
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 must
to
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cut
a
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 time of
car
chases
, raise the age category for films with violence and
school
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 administration should warn pupils. It is the most effective way to reduce the
amount
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 of accidents on roads. Owing
to
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cutting time of
chases
,
refocus
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to
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 other things and raising the age category will decrease the number of youngsters. The
next
 is
warn
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 students, it gives awareness of
situation
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. In conclusion, I hope
this
 strategy will help people and the government with
influence
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 of movies and if actions were taken, the
amount
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 of accidents would go down
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