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it has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Advantages and disadvantages

#children #vegetables #animals
Should the primary
children
 be taught gardening and animal husbandry
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their
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 early age? The merits of learning aforesaid skills, which
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possibility
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 to grow organic
food
 and to
learn
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 about
animals
,
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 insignificant in comparison to the demerits of
the
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learning these skills, including distraction from academics and danger of any accident .
Wheather
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 the recommendation that primary
children
 be taught gardening and animal husbandry holds any logic? The above development may
leads
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 to
develop
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 a skill not only
to
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 growing organic
food
 but
also
 to learn animal care.
This
 is because
of
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learning about vegetable plating and animal care, in primary classes, could help a child to learn about agriculture and helps to grow a variety of naturally developed vegetables, be it cabbage, Spinach, onion or potato, more effectively and
also
 help to learn about
animals
 requirements;
consequently
, organic
food
 growing techniques will help a child to eat
healthy
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 meal and
also
 helps to develop his interest with
animals
 care and get acquainted
to
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 the unconditional love of pets. Despite the possibility of getting organic
food
 and knowledge about
animals
 in elementary
school
, it
is
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inevitablely
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inevitably
inevitable
effect
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affect
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 the academic performance of a
school goer
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schoolgoer
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. Since the vegetable plantation and
animals
 require
a
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regular watch and hard efforts, certainly,
the
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primary
school
children
 will find it hard to concentrate on their studies.
As a result
, their academic performance would be affected; and in
worse
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 case,
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the student
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student
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 can be expelled from
school
 owing to bad performance in class.
Besides
 the bad result in
school
, indulging
the
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primary
school
children
 in
such
 practices will definitely put their lives in danger. To be precise, for vegetable growing some pesticides and insecticides are used for
their
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better growth, thereby those are very harmful
for
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children
 and a fatal accident could
be happened
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.
This apart
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, some
animals
 are non-friendly,
For example
- some specified cruel species of dogs like Pitbull, and allowing the
children
 to interact with them could put their lives in danger. In conclusion,
although
the
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primary
children
 can get the benefits from growing organic
food
 and
also
 caring
animals
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,
yet
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it's
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 demerits of fatal accidents and lack of concentration in studies
are
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far outstrip the former.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable practices
  • cultural literacy
  • hands-on experience
  • nutritional awareness
  • curriculum integration
  • time management
  • resource allocation
  • school gardening projects
  • animal husbandry
  • ecosystem education
  • dietary habits
  • work ethic
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