''Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Recently, there have been arguments that

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of

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body

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is better than

cure

due to getting

illness

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the illness

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is too expensive

thus

, it is better to spend

money

for

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a

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body

. I totally agree with

this

statement because of two reasons.

Firstly

, as the questioners said, getting

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illness

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illuness

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illness

is more expensive to

cure

than spending

money

for

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.Because, some of

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diseases

disease

are

demended

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demanded

reminded

to stay at hospital for a while, in

this

case, the person who need to spend a great deal of

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money

for

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staying

there to

cure

.

Although

,

careing

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caring

own

body

is only do

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some

exsarceises

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exercises

and keeping steady

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of meals. It does not

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demand

depend

to use

money

more than

usuall

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usual

usually

. Just worry about usual life more by yourself. From

this

act,

cure

of

body

demand much

money

,

otherwise

people are not allow to take a hospital but protecting

body

only worry about own

body

.

Secondly

, sometimes it is hard to serve better hospitality. Constantly taking

care

of own

body

will effect to avoid some

of

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situations

such

as cancer. Serious

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illness

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expenditure

is getting more serious situation along time going. So, patients have to

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and

care

for

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time. The type of person would spent much

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money

many

and many times. From

this

statement, nothing disadvantage to preventing

body

constantly. In conclusion, some people

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belive

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believe

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that

the

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taking hospital is more expensive than protecting

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bossy

body

boys

by

myself

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because of

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the cost

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of hospitals and

times

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are

lose

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.