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There are many advertisement directed at children. Parents argue that children are mislead, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion?

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Children
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 nowadays are equipped with gadgets like mobile phones and tablets which are easily exposed to programs with many
advertisements
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.
Parents
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 protest that kids with exposure to
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 are misled,
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, the advertisers have the opposite
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. From my perspective, I strongly agreed with the
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'
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. I will
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 elaborate based on my
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Firstly
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, most
advertisements
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 do not have strict rules for their target viewers, the contents of the
advertisement
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 might not be filtered or go through by the Department of Social Media and technology, and anyone can access or
view
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 them
any time
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 and anywhere.
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,
advertisements
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 about fast food products like KFC or Mcdonald's tend to attract
children
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 who crave them which eventually builds the habit of eating fast food rather than healthy meals. The frequency of advertising will affect the frequency of the idea
imprint
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 in the
children
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's minds.
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,
advertisements
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 do present misleading information and are trusted by
children
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 because
children
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 have not developed sufficient thinking skills to analyse the given pieces of information.
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 that, some gaming advertisers tend to advertise their gaming products on general social media like Facebook, Instagram and Twitter.
Children
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 will easily fall for
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 type of
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 and addicted to
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online games. With the influences of the character from the gaming system, some
children
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 developed rebellious characteristics and present with aggressive behaviour, even
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 their ability to feel empathy. There were cases where
children
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 brutally beat their
parents
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 from stopping them to proceed with online gaming.
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, some purchasing
advertisements
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 will lure kids to purchase their products without consent from their
parents
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.
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, a kid from China used his mother's bank account to purchase thousands of
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 of gaming equipment and left with single-digit savings. To sum up, good and content educational value
advertisements
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 are rarely to be spotted.
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, I agree that
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advertisement
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 will be influenced and misled from the
advertisement
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 since the time they spend on social media and technology are more.
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