With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?
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demand
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oil and Change preposition
for
gas
resources
have increased then
, extend
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extended
areas
of the world will be able to get more resources
. I partially agree with this
statement because of two reasons.
Firstly
, one of the biggest issues is shortest
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the shortest
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resources
resorces
which are oil and Correct your spelling
resources
gas
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these
thses
days. For present people, both Correct your spelling
these
resources
are important to live
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,
we usually use Remove the comma
apply
vehacules
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vehicles
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which
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are nesscery for making our life Correct your spelling
which
easily
. Replace the word
easier
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, oil and gas
have been using
for cars, buses, air computers and Wrong verb form
used
gas
heats
. We cannot live without those things. Fix the agreement mistake
heat
Thus
, decreasing Correct your spelling
amounts
amonts
of these Correct your spelling
amounts
resources
should be Correct your spelling
serious
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serious
situations
. Avoid Fix the agreement mistake
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serious
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situations, we have to find new places to get a great Correct your spelling
serious
dial
of sources before we can live our life steady without those Correct your spelling
deal
resources
.
Secondly
, one of the disadvantages of extending new areas
is the natural environmental situation could be much distraction. For instance
, finding resources
need to logging
some woods due to making Wrong verb form
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be
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to
worldwide Change preposition
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environmental
envirnmental
issues for disappeared forests from the world. We need to worry Correct your spelling
environmental
about
that Change preposition
apply
the
extending new places will be much Correct article usage
apply
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influences
influence
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influances
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influence
for
our life.
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believe
belive
that in terms of the Correct your spelling
believe
rasing
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rising
resources
demand
us to extend Correct subject-verb agreement
demands
areas
to find them. There are merit and demerit such
as the
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to need for living
but it should be much Add an article
a living
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damaged
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