Some believe that standardized English exams, like IELTS, are just big business to make money. others, however, think that standardized English exams are important for society. Which do you believe and why Give explanations and examples to support your explanations with support your opinion.

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think that public English exam which
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individual's
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English skills has
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sole purpose that
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a lot of profits.
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, there are many protesters, like me,
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that it is a very useful tool to prove
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member's
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English achievement and proficiency. Due to
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their hectic schedule, modern
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would rather give cash
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instead
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of in-kind. Apparently, contemporary citizens are under great stress and have to be always engaged in either their work or study.
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, they do not have enough time to prepare
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because they are usually deeply stuck in their workplaces or schools.
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, as they do not have ample time to spare and learn about others’ preferences, they think that it is a more practical thing to do.
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, in South Korea and other East Asian countries like China,
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opt to send through applications like KakaoTalk or WeChat. From my perspective,
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development spawns positive consequences.
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, both giving
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in kind and in cash show the giver’s well wishes to the receiver. From the recipients’ point of view, they are more grateful for the sincerity of the giver than for what they receive.
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, celebrating events
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as the
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birthday of a colleague’s or a friend’s baby generally accompanies considerable expenditure on the reservation of the party room, food catering service, and so on, the giver’s cash
gifts
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are properly utilized in these situations.
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, many
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usually end up giving the same kind of present which can be very impractical. In conclusion, it is clear to me that giving money is a more reasonable choice which is perfectly suitable for the
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living in the modern world.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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