A recent survey shows that in many countries across the world people are generally living longer. But an increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for the society as a whole. What are the possible effects of a longer life expectancy on individuals and the society?

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society is one important problem that most

countries

have to face.

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, whether

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aging

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individuals

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effects

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whole societies is a controversial issue. In my opinion, the elder situation has

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negative

implication

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in many

countries

. With technologies developing,

people

’s

life

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are

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more and

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longer. In some areas, we can find

lots

of

people

have

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over 100

ages

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. Meanwhile, young

people

don’t want to have

baby

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early because they are working in

this

world full of competition. Thereby reducing population is an extremely important problem that many

countries

have to address, especially some developed

countries

.

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, you can see there are

lots

of elders in public transport, parks and supermarkets. At the same time, many old

people

have to continue working

although

they retired, the simple reason is that

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of young

people

want

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to work and replace them. Some old

people

need to take care of their children’s

baby

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because their children are very busy.

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the other hand, the government should provide

lots

of

source

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for

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aging

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society. They need to spend

lots

of money

for

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elders. Investing in public health, creating care

centre

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for elders,

building

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some

entertainments

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facilities for ole

peoples

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people

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are all examples. So the government need more money

form

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all the taxpayer or reduce the investment in other options,

such

as infrastructure, public education and entertainment etc.

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, young

people

have to spend time

to take

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care of their parents

although

they are very busy

,

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so

that

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some of them always make mistakes in their job because of pressure. In conclusion,

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aging

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society is a popular problem that

lots

of

countries

should face. I believe it could be

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in the future.