You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. You do NOT need to write any address.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am an art and history professor at Delhi University and I am writing

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letter to enquire about the details of the seminar on the civilization of various countries which is going to happen in Toronto, Canada. I would like to understand if there are any prerequisites to attending the conclave. To give you some background, I have been preparing some content related to the significance of ancient cultures and their heritage,

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, if there is a possibility

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I am willing to present it. With respect to other additional information

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as price, event, place and time and accommodation etc., would like to know at the earliest so that I can plan for my arrangements. Could you please

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arrange an official letter for me to present a travel case and request my Visa to Canada

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Appreciate your help. Awaiting your response. Thanks in advance. Yours sincerely, Prudhvi Pinninti

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Oct 13, 2022

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