Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition? And give your own opinion.

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Every parent wants to make their child successful and due to

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they prefer to provide them extra

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after their institute. Certain people do not prefer it as well, on the other side. There are plenty of merits and demerits of personal tuition. I will discuss both and will give my opinion at the end.

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of all, if we talk about the benefits of it,

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there can be various. Some juveniles have a hard time understanding classwork while in school, so extra departments are very helpful for them and enhance their skills.

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and learn about their weaknesses and strengths,

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they start working to overcome those disabilities.

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affects the grades of children.

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, private tuition does not provide pros from the financial sites. Apart from the school's fees, parents have to pay extra money to the tuition tutor which is a waste of money.

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, it puts a burden on teenagers' brains because ,

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they have to go for additional ones and

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, the mental health of youngsters is affected.

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, they could not able to communicate with their family on a regular basis because they have less time for communicating. In my perspective,

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there are many advantages and disadvantages of

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of going them outside because they will learn morals along with studying and it will have less on their mental stress.

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Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition? And give your own opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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