Students perform better in school when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that pupils only achieve good academic results thanks to rewards. In my opinion,

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, I believe that punishment

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contributes to the success of learners’ performance. On the one hand, there are some reasons why prizes can encourage

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to study better. The

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reason is that being rewarded will stimulate

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to learn. To be more specific, learners have a sense of recognition when they are given a reward in a lesson.

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, they believe that their efforts are accepted and they will try harder to acquire more goals.

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, they will devote more time

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learning to obtain higher marks. The

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reason to support

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opinion is that prizes can motivate

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to challenge themselves.

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, learners are encouraged to do a

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difficult task to obtain a present that no one has ever achieved before. By doing so, it might involve most of the

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an environment in which

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have a chance to break their

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.

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, I would argue that

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sometimes should be punished in order to perform better at

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.

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,

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can help to raise their awareness of responsibilities.

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, pupils cannot be granted any presents if they fail to do homework. What is more, doing

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exercises

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at home is beneficial for them to revise all the knowledge for their final tests.

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, if they don’t finish that task, there should be some measures to punish them so that they will be aware of their missions in the future.

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, punishment at

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might result in lower proportions of those who drop out. It is believed that schools are the sole places to gain knowledge and

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cannot go anywhere to learn. If they violate any of the

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rules, their names will be put

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.

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, pupils will be conscious of the importance of

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and try to be well-

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to learn. In conclusion,

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prizes can give motivation to

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, they should be approached

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rules and consequences if they want to study better.