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Is technology limiting creativity? Discuss your opinion

#technology #creativity
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• In our modern life,
technology
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 has been proven to be a revolution in
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 everyday
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 of industry and some
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 believe that
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technology
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 reduces human creativity in life. But I do not agree with these opinions at all, because if there were no
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 in our time, no human would have been able to rise to
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 level,
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,
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 can not imagine their lives without
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. • On the one hand, some
people
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 think that
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 has a bad effect on humanity and causes their creativity to decrease or disappear altogether. Because nowadays
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 are developing so much that it is easy for everyone to get enough
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 by using
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 of organizing themselves.
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, if we take students, in the past, students used to go to libraries to find a single piece of
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 and had to read a whole book to get one piece of
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, but now it is difficult to find
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, and the reason why young
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 do not believe in themselves is that they rely on
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. •
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, in my ,opinion and many
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's opinion,
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 do not contribute to the decline of
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's consciousness and knowledge, but to the development of humanity, because in today's time, everything depends on
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, with the help of which a person can get mature and perfect knowledge in all aspects.
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, if we take telephones or computers as an example, they are the need of the hour and easy to use, save time and have extensive
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 on all topics, and books are convenient to use whenever we want, but
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 is a little inconvenient. Again, I strongly believe that
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 will never lead to the decline of knowledge. • In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned and I can come to
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 conclusion that,
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 are the main factor in the development of
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, and after the development of
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, the state will
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 develop.
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