In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a results od eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food

It is important to consider how much money we spend on canned

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nowadays. While some

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believe that the

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should levy an additional tax on the consumption of sugary and related items, others argue that creating awareness programs by the

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may help its

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in following a healthy lifestyle. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument while I support the latter opinion. On the

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hand, a lot of

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suggest that a higher tax ought to be imposed on the consumption of junk

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.

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is because of the fact that

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, in turn, will reduce consumption eventually since

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, generally, are price sensitive. To illustrate

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point, a similar action plan was executed by the

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to discourage its law-abiding

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to quit smoking quite recently.

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, if

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action is not implemented in the near future,

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's health will deteriorate patently.

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, the

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should create awareness camps to educate its

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in regard to following a healthy lifestyle. It is because of the fact that

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, who are accustomed to eating unhealthy meals and sugary items, will devour them regardless of a change in price.

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, a person, who is addicted to smoking, will consume cigarettes despite a change in

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price.

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, the attitude and behaviour of its

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towards fast

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can be changed if they are exposed to well-drafted awareness communications. In conclusion,

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levying a higher tax on buying and selling fast

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may stop a few foodies from consuming unhealthy edibles,

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should be educated with respect to the pros and cons of following an unhealthy way of life. I think

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may help the

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to help its

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from health issues arising

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processed

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