Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some individuals that high-skilled
workers
and those who render specialised services should only practice their professions in the state where they got their education, while others think they can go to other places to work
. In my opinion, I believe these groups of professionals
should have the freedom to work
where they desire so that they can gain more experience and this
will aid even distribution of skilled workers
.
On the one hand, some people believe that specialists should only work
in places where they got their trainings
so that the government can reap the benefits of the cost invested Change the wording
training
pieces of training
on
their Change preposition
in
trainings
. Change the wording
training
pieces of training
This
means that most countries
spend lots of money to train this
category of workers
and so their migration out of the country after graduation will mean the funds spent on their education is
wasted. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
For example
, most poor nations suffer economic loss and brain drain because their groomed professionals
move to richer countries
.
On the other hand
, I believe professionals
should enjoy the liberty to practice anywhere they wish. One reason for this
is that it allows them gain
more skills and expertise. Add the particle
to gain
In other words
, when people go to work
in foreign countries
, they learn other things that might not be available in their home country. For instance
, most nurses from under-developed nations get to use specialised equipments
like an incubator when they go outside their home Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
countries
where they are trained. Furthermore
, migrating
Replace the word
migration
of
Change preposition
apply
workers
Change preposition
to
in
another country can lead to Change preposition
to
even
distribution of Correct article usage
the even
professionals
. Take for
example,governments that have more engineers Add the comma(s)
,for
countries
that have a lesser number and travel to places that are In dire need of them.
In conclusion, while others believe specialised Correct word choice
and countries
workers
should only practice in countries
where they got their education, I think they can work
in another state to enable them gain
more skills and aid equal distribution of Add the particle
to gain
specialist
.Fix the agreement mistake
specialists
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite