Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?
The natural
ecosystems are disappearing by Correct article usage
Natural
plastic
in the ocean
. This
essay will suggest that plastic
destroy
ecosystems and made the problem of reducing Correct subject-verb agreement
destroys
number
of sea Change the article
a number
the number
animals
and polluting water
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the water
by
toxic elements and Change preposition
with
solution
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the solution
of
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to
this
is stopping
dropping rubbish into Change the verb form
to stop
ocean
and Add an article
the ocean
collect
litter from Wrong verb form
collecting
ocean
Add an article
the ocean
surface
.
Today, the problem of ocean
pollution is particularly acute, almost the entire ocean
is polluted with plastic
, which kills many marine lives and pollutes the water
with toxins. Plastic
kills many animals
directly, so sea turtles confuse plastic
bags with jellyfish, which is why they suffocate, as well as with
fish and other Change preposition
apply
animals
that eat plastic
. Also
, some types of plastic
do not sink in water
and have been on the surface
of the water
under direct rays for many years, which is why oil and other elements in them decompose into toxins that kill not only fish but even bacteria. So, for example
, in the North Pacific Ocean
there is a large Add a comma
,Ocean
garbage
spot, because of which 150 thousand kilograms of toxins go
into the Change the form of the verb
going
water
every day, because of which up to 2 million marine inhabitants die every year.
And solution
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the solution
a solution
of
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to
this
problems
is stopping Fix the agreement mistake
problem
drop
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the drop
litter
in Change preposition
of litter
ocean
and collecting rubbish from Correct article usage
the ocean
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the ocean
ocean
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ocean's
surface
. Everyday
thousands and thousands of tons of trash dropping into Replace the word
Every day
ocean
if Add an article
the ocean
people
will be trained and known
about Wrong verb form
know
consequences
, they will stop dropping rubbish into Correct article usage
the consequences
water
. Add an article
the water
Secondly
Add a comma
,Secondly
people
must be started to collect trash from ocean
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the ocean
surface
this
will reduce the level of polluting
by Replace the word
pollution
plastic
and will save many marine animals
. For example
, there are some ocean
cleanup projects in the world like ocean
cleanup, according to the project, boats thanks to nets will collect all kinds of large debris on the surface
of the water
to reduce all the damage of pollution.
in general, people
have heavily polluted the entire ocean
in recent years, which caused the death of many animals
, but people
can solve these problems if they stop throwing garbage
into the ocean
and start collecting garbage
that already interferes with the life of animals
in the ocean
. And if people
listen to these tips, by 2050 they will be able to remove 80% of all garbage
in the ocean
, and I recommend that people
do this
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