Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?

The natural
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ecosystems are disappearing by
plastic
in the
ocean
.
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essay will suggest that
plastic
destroy
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ecosystems and made the problem of reducing
number
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a number
the number
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of sea
animals
and polluting
water
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the water
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by
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with
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toxic elements and
solution
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the solution
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of
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to
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this
is
stopping
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to stop
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dropping rubbish into
ocean
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the ocean
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and
collect
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collecting
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litter from
ocean
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the ocean
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surface
. Today, the problem of
ocean
pollution is particularly acute, almost the entire
ocean
is polluted with
plastic
, which kills many marine lives and pollutes the
water
with toxins.
Plastic
kills many
animals
directly, so sea turtles confuse
plastic
bags with jellyfish, which is why they suffocate, as well as
with
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apply
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fish and other
animals
that eat
plastic
.
Also
, some types of
plastic
do not sink in
water
and have been on the
surface
of the
water
under direct rays for many years, which is why oil and other elements in them decompose into toxins that kill not only fish but even bacteria. So,
for example
, in the North Pacific
Ocean
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,Ocean
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there is a large
garbage
spot, because of which 150 thousand kilograms of toxins
go
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going
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into the
water
every day, because of which up to 2 million marine inhabitants die every year. And
solution
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the solution
a solution
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of
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to
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this
problems
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problem
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is stopping
drop
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the drop
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litter
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of litter
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in
ocean
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the ocean
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and collecting rubbish from
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the ocean
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ocean
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ocean's
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surface
.
Everyday
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thousands and thousands of tons of trash dropping into
ocean
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the ocean
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if
people
will be trained and
known
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know
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about
consequences
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the consequences
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, they will stop dropping rubbish into
water
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the water
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.
Secondly
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people
must be started to collect trash from
ocean
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the ocean
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surface
this
will reduce the level of
polluting
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pollution
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by
plastic
and will save many marine
animals
.
For example
, there are some
ocean
cleanup projects in the world like
ocean
cleanup, according to the project, boats thanks to nets will collect all kinds of large debris on the
surface
of the
water
to reduce all the damage of pollution. in general,
people
have heavily polluted the entire
ocean
in recent years, which caused the death of many
animals
, but
people
can solve these problems if they stop throwing
garbage
into the
ocean
and start collecting
garbage
that already interferes with the life of
animals
in the
ocean
. And if
people
listen to these tips, by 2050 they will be able to remove 80% of all
garbage
in the
ocean
, and I recommend that
people
do
this
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