Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?

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The natural
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ecosystems are disappearing by
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in the
ocean
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.
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plastic
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destroy
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ecosystems and made the problem of reducing
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a number
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of sea
animals
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and polluting
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water
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the water
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by
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with
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toxic elements and
solution
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the solution
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of
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to
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this
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is
stopping
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dropping rubbish into
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ocean
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the ocean
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and
collect
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collecting
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litter from
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ocean
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the ocean
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surface
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. Today, the problem of
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pollution is particularly acute, almost the entire
ocean
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is polluted with
plastic
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, which kills many marine lives and pollutes the
water
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with toxins.
Plastic
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kills many
animals
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directly, so sea turtles confuse
plastic
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bags with jellyfish, which is why they suffocate, as well as
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fish and other
animals
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that eat
plastic
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.
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, some types of
plastic
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do not sink in
water
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and have been on the
surface
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of the
water
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under direct rays for many years, which is why oil and other elements in them decompose into toxins that kill not only fish but even bacteria. So,
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, in the North Pacific
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Ocean
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,Ocean
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there is a large
garbage
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spot, because of which 150 thousand kilograms of toxins
go
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going
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into the
water
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every day, because of which up to 2 million marine inhabitants die every year. And
solution
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of
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this
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problems
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problem
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is stopping
drop
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the drop
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litter
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of litter
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in
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ocean
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the ocean
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and collecting rubbish from
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the ocean
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ocean
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ocean's
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surface
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.
Everyday
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thousands and thousands of tons of trash dropping into
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ocean
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the ocean
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if
people
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will be trained and
known
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know
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about
consequences
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the consequences
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, they will stop dropping rubbish into
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water
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the water
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Secondly
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people
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must be started to collect trash from
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ocean
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the ocean
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surface
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will reduce the level of
polluting
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pollution
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by
plastic
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and will save many marine
animals
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.
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, there are some
ocean
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cleanup projects in the world like
ocean
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cleanup, according to the project, boats thanks to nets will collect all kinds of large debris on the
surface
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of the
water
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to reduce all the damage of pollution. in general,
people
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have heavily polluted the entire
ocean
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in recent years, which caused the death of many
animals
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, but
people
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can solve these problems if they stop throwing
garbage
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into the
ocean
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and start collecting
garbage
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that already interferes with the life of
animals
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in the
ocean
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. And if
people
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listen to these tips, by 2050 they will be able to remove 80% of all
garbage
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in the
ocean
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, and I recommend that
people
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do
this
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