Plastic is destroying the natural ecosystem in the ocean. What are the problems associated with this issues and what are the possible solutions?

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The natural
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oceanic ecosystem is being destroyed by
plastic
.
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essay will demonstrate
such
ecological
problems
as reducing levels of biodiversity and less
food
to coastal countries that depend on seafood and offer
such
solutions as collecting and recycling
plastic
on the surface of the ocean and popularizing
fishing
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industry in artificial lakes and rivers inside the country.
Plastic
pollution of water causes a number of
problems
, including fewer animal species compared to past centuries and
food
shortages in countries relying on marine products.
To begin
with,
plastic
disrupts the ecosystem by polluting the
seabottom
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sea bottom
sea-bottom
and preventing plankton from eating properly, which is followed by the death of
fish
higher up the
food
chain.
Plastic
pollution
also
affects
fish
production in fishing countries
such
as Sweden, Finland and Japan, making
fish
sick and inedible
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This
is illustrated by the case in Vietnam in 2021
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when 70% of fishing enterprises urgently stopped their work due to the death and disease of
fish
used for
food
. Fortunately, even
such
difficult
problems
have their own solutions, which consist in catching and recycling
plastic
on the surfaces of
sea
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the sea
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and in the massive creation of commercial artificial rivers and lakes.
First
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problem can be easily solved the
first
problem can be easily solved by the introduction of special physical cleaning systems that will mechanically collect various plastics in nets from the surface of the ocean. The solution to the
second
problem is much more difficult, but popularizing the creation of artificial ponds and lakes, where people will breed the types of
fish
they need for
food
purposes, can solve the seafood crisis. In Iceland in 2005, for the
first
time, people created a reservoir in which
such
species of
fish
as Japanese carp koi and salmon could live and breed,
in addition
,
researches
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have shown that about 100-200 kilos of
fish
can be caught from 10 square meters of
such
a pond. All things considered, only a really serious ecological catastrophe can cause a
food
crisis in the modern world and a thinning of biodiversity, and only people can solve these
problems
by catching and recycling waste and creating new efficient ponds.
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