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In many ciuntries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

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Recently, there have been arguments that going to single-sex
schools
 brings more demerits than going to co-educational
schools
 which is in the parent's hands to decide which choose in several countries. I partially agree with
this
 statement because of two reasons.
Firstly
, there are so many reasons why parents decide to go to single-sex
schools
 for children
such
 as the child who
has
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 some disadvantages when relate to girls due to traumatized or something. In
this
 case, it is difficult to go to a co-educational school by the child.
Moreover
, children are possible to concentrate more about study because there are no relationships with other genders. From
this
, a lot of kinds of reasons there
thus
, established the type of
schools
 now.
Secondly
, getting experiences of co-educational will affects becoming an adult.
For instance
, generally, when we became an adult, we join a company to do work at that time. It will increase some opportunities to relate with women, commonly. In
this
 case, the person who gets used to relating with the woman is better advantageous for working in negotiations and, keeping better relationships among a company. For
this
 reason, there are merits as well to going to co-educational
schools
. In conclusion, some people believe that in terms of going to single-sex
schools
 brings some disadvantages than go to co-educational
schools
 though, it is possible to decide by parents.
In addition
, it depends on the child's situation but, there are so many advantages to going to co-educational
schools
 as I said.
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