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mobile phone usage is responsible for lot of medical social technical problem what forms this problem take do you agree that the problem outweigh advantages of mobile phones.

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usage
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the usage
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 of
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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 towards
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comparitievely
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comparatively
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 have depicted in
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To begin
 with, mobile would help an
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individual
induvidual
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 to connect with his/her loved ones even though they are 100 miles away, which might not be possible without
this
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the
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people are enjoying
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part time
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 jobs on the account of
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development. For an instance, my friend who is working for a real estate firm is given
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an
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 option to work from anywhere with his mobile phone,
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In addition
,
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 without money is possible
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nowadays
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,
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 transactions
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peoples
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 life much more
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convenient
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convenient
. Previously theft was one
among
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 the problem faced by
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humans because of carrying
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money,
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 the arrival of mobile it is solved. For
an
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example,
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 am from India we were using hard cash for the day
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to day
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 payment before,
however
,
this
 has changed now with the new scheme UPI,
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a cashless
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 payment which is taking the nation to
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safe and secure payments
On the other hand
, majority of the
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children
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childrens
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is
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 getting addicted to games and social media which is a major threat,
however
, eradicating
this
 is possible, with the right
guideness
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guidelines
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respected people at
the
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 very young age can save them,
moreover
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 it will help them to know the positives and negatives which may give education to them on how to use it for their betterment. In
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conclusion
conclution
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conclusion
, problems faced by
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individuals
induviduals
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individuals
 with the usage of mobiles are unavoidable,
however
, the fortune
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 having
these technology
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 is tremendous. It
reflect
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 that
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pros
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has
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 a far greater edge than the cons
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