Many people feel the urban encivronments are more unhealthy than they have ever been What do you think are the main causes of the problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem ?
It is undeniable that life in the urban
center
has become more unhealthy year after year. Change the spelling
centre
This
issue is caused by both: overpopulation in megalopolis; and the excessive use of pollutive sources. Linking Words
However
, it is still possible to reverse that situation with correct government incentives.
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Firstly
and foremost, it is important to understand the history behind it. With the beginning of industrialisation, in the 18th century, there was a change in economic dynamics that made workers migrate from rural to industrial areas seeking Linking Words
for
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a job
the job
job
. That was the trigger for the urbanisation process leading to a higher number of people concentrated on a small portion of land. From Fix the agreement mistake
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then
on, we started seeing a domino effect where in order to accommodate the spiking demand for houses, green spaces were converted into concrete constructions, Linking Words
consequently
reducing the renovation of O2 and decreasing the air quality. Linking Words
Moreover
, decades later, the superpoluted centre generated mobility issues and cars became a relevant component of modern life increasing even Linking Words
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the
atmosphere pollution.
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Therefore
, in my opinion, the main solution is to set incentives to decentralise work opportunities and develop towns Linking Words
to
smaller urban centres where there is still a possibility Change preposition
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of
maintaining
a balance between the proportion of buildings and nature. Luckily, decentralization is more possible than ever, because technology has brought the possibility, for several professionals, to work anywhere. At the same time, there are other measures that could help to improve air quality, Wrong verb form
maintain
for example
, by regulating the use of petrol as combustive and making it more accessible to buy electric cars.
In conclusion, we have to face the reality that Linking Words
urban
lifestyle has generated an impressive issue with environmental Correct article usage
the urban
healthy
and it is, not only importantReplace the word
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but Remove the comma
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also
urgent to minimize the impact before it is too late.Linking Words
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