Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Before entering

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studies, many young people start to work or travel for a

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after they finish high school.

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essay will suggest the advantages

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as we can gain many experiences and money saved but delaying careers and reducing motivation to study are the disadvantages. The main advantages of a

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break before attending

university

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are that

students

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can learn about the world and earn money for future use.

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or travelling for a

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will allow

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to learn about the difficulties of life outside of the education system.

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, the fees of

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university

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are high, and a lot of

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decided to work and save for their

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study

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.

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, one of my sisters took a break before entering

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. She gained many experiences and learned about different people and personalities.

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, she can work in big companies after finishing

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. Despite these advantages,

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lose a

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that could have been used to improve their future careers. Some get used to working or travelling and they lose motivation to study, and they don’t want to attend

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anymore. As job markets are competitive,

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those who finished

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and

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didn’t have huge differences in opportunities. There will be

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opportunities for those who took a

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off.

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, according to a recent survey by the British Government, 26% of

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who take a gap

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never enter

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. In conclusion, taking a

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year

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break from studies can gain experience and save money but they should consider not

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their careers and not

to lose

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motivation.