Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that the suitable way to enhance people's health is by providing more numbers of
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Nevertheless
, some people believe that these would be less effective unless some other precautions are being taken. The below paragraphs will discuss both views and argue in favour of it.
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matter a lot. If these places are not within the proximate area, the community would not prefer to go daily. Linking Words
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, it has been noticed that many families have left membership of these clubs due to high monthly fees.
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available, if we would not change our lifestyle, there will not be any significant benefit from it. Nowadays, people are under stress due to workload and, Use synonyms
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, sufficient time is not available for them to visit clubs on a daily. Linking Words
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adversely impact their body. In order to maintain our health,each one should be required to do yoga and meditation and adopts healthy food habits. Linking Words
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academies focus on diet along with recommended exercises to get the maximum advantage of it.
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