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Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

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In our modern life,
technology
 has become an integral part of individuals' life and some
people
 believe that
,
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technology
 is
one
 of the main factors that lead to a decrease in human
creativity
. In my opinion, if
technology
 is used for its purpose, it can be beneficial for mankind.
This
 essay will discuss both two viewpoints in a depth. On the
one
 hand, according to some, the growth of
technology
 positively impacts
creativity
 since it makes it easier for
people
 to obtain any kind of data through the internet.
In addition
 to
this
, there are several sources are available on the internet where individuals can learn how to boost their thinking abilities and improve their knowledge.
For example
, the website called Creative Thinking has been found
one
 of the favourable websites by many
people
 who were facing challenges about
creativity
.
On the other hand
, nowadays majority of humans utilize social media to find new information or idea,
as a result
 of
this
, the significant usage of
technology
 has made many
people
 to be addicted to it,
therefore
technology
 might be limiting creative growth.
For example
, social media is
one
 of the biggest sources of new ideas and is freely accessible to everybody, it
also
 gives you an opportunity to find anything quickly,
thus
 nowadays majority of individuals prefer to use the internet as it requires less effort to find out something new rather than using their own brains. To conclude, having everything mentioned I can come to the conclusion that,
technology
 might give us numerous advantages within a short period of time and less effort,
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 it has
also
 some negative impacts on humans'
creativity
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual
  • digital
  • online
  • accessibility
  • inclusivity
  • cultural heritage
  • physical experience
  • immersion
  • local tourism
  • economy
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