Some people claim that museums and art galleries are not needed today because everyone can see historical objects or art works by computer. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern life,

technology

has become an integral part of individuals' life and some

people

believe that

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technology

is

one

of the main factors that lead to a decrease in human

creativity

. In my opinion, if

technology

is used for its purpose, it can be beneficial for mankind.

This

essay will discuss both two viewpoints in a depth. On the

one

hand, according to some, the growth of

technology

positively impacts

creativity

since it makes it easier for

people

to obtain any kind of data through the internet.

In addition

to

this

, there are several sources are available on the internet where individuals can learn how to boost their thinking abilities and improve their knowledge.

For example

, the website called Creative Thinking has been found

one

of the favourable websites by many

people

who were facing challenges about

creativity

.

On the other hand

, nowadays majority of humans utilize social media to find new information or idea,

as a result

of

this

, the significant usage of

technology

has made many

people

to be addicted to it,

therefore

technology

might be limiting creative growth.

For example

, social media is

one

of the biggest sources of new ideas and is freely accessible to everybody, it

also

gives you an opportunity to find anything quickly,

thus

nowadays majority of individuals prefer to use the internet as it requires less effort to find out something new rather than using their own brains. To conclude, having everything mentioned I can come to the conclusion that,

technology

might give us numerous advantages within a short period of time and less effort,

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it has

also

some negative impacts on humans'

creativity

.