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Some people say it is a waste of time when plan for the future .It is more important to focus on present.Ti what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Some people claim planning for the
future
 is a waste of time and believe giving attention to the current times is more essential. I completely disagree that
future
 planning is time-wasting
This
 essay will discuss the consequences of a lack of
future
 planning in terms of
career
 and raising a family. There are many reasons why a lack of planning ahead is not time-wasting.
Firstly
, people want o develop a
career
 so that they can cater for themselves and their families.
However
, failure to be educated or trained to develop critical skills may affect earning good wages at work.
This
 is evident in many grown-up people who lack important skills and
therefore
, are short of choices in their
career
 but to pursue unskilled low-paid jobs because they never planned to develop essential skills at a young age.
Thus
, those who only focus on the present may eventually find themselves with no
career
 direction.
Furthermore
, poor planning for the
future
 may
also
 affect marriages. Many couples wish to have many children and send them to good schools for quality education.
Therefore
, a strong financial
plan
 will help in attaining
this
 wish.
For example
, having good savings from income will help in caring for the children and the entire family.
Therefore
, those who have adequate plans can easily wither any tough circumstances that may link to raising a family.
Additionally
, without a proper
future
plan
, marriage may collapse when hardship set in.
That is
, struggling to feed the family can lead to couples divorcing.
However
, with a good
plan
, couples can live a quality life and their family. In conclusion, it is advisable to have a proper
future
plan
 in order to avoid hardship and bad wages that may affect the quality of life.
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