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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples.

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When people have to apply for a job , they have a lot of choices at their disposal so it means that need to make different decisions.
One
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 is whether to choose a big
company
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 or a small
one
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.Personally, I prefer to work in a big
company
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 for several reasons that I will explain below in
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 essay.
To begin
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,being an employee in a big
company
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provide
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 more opportunities than a smaller
one
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 which will help your personal career. To explain,if you work very hard in a large association it is possible that you will get promoted and increase your salary.
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, imagine that a worker did an excellent job in the business and your supervisor decided to increase your pay, the amount in the large
company
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 might be greater because it has more money. Moving
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, large organisations set up more rules, and regulations and, have a more complete motivation system.To be more specific,the advantage of working in a more regulated
company
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 is that the employees
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 be exploited because all the rules are written down.
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, an employee has to work overtime ,and he knows that he will be paid ,as a rule , another example is that a worker knows that if he works hard will be promoted and get a higher salary.
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 , the above reasons and examples are the motivations that push to choose a large business rather than a little
one
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.the former is better organized and offers more occasions in the long run for my career.
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Expand on your examples to provide more detail and support for your points.
task response
Make sure to fully answer the prompt by providing a balanced discussion of both working in a large company and a small company.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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