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New technologies present children with new possibilities and potential dangers. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of technology on children in today’s society.

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The development of technologies provides younglings with opportunities,
however
, it has a certain set of problems.
This
 essay discusses both the positive and negative
effect
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effects
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 on the common people's life
To Begin
 with, introducing new technology has numerous possibilities for the young ones in the field of education. He/She will be able to use the internet which is an open source where the individual could find solutions for all the questions. For an instance, my friend who is studying MBBS finds it difficult to learn the difficult topics from just the lecture,
although
 he could clarify with the youtube videos available for it.
In addition
, students find it helpful when it comes to jobs, because the various apps and websites available in the markets pave the way towards their dream job,
moreover
, it makes them aware that
what
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apply
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all the skills needed for the job role
which
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apply
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benefits
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 the individual while applying for the same.
On the other hand
, since technology is improvising day by day students find more time to use it which makes them addicted.
Furthermore
, most of them forgot how to interact in daily life which makes the person feel mentally ill and it is damaging
his
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 mental health.
For example
, recently in India, one student committed suicide after playing a game, (Blue whale) he unknowingly got addicted to it which later took his soul. To sum up, the impact of new technology is vital in
this
 era, because, it makes the growth of an individual easy.
However
, there are certain demerits related to it
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