Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, it is alleged that going to the
cinema
was replaced by watching the
film on digital devices Correct article usage
apply
such
as Correct your spelling
smartphones
smart phones
and Correct your spelling
smartphones
that is
not required anymore. Other
argument is that to do so is attractive due to movies should be seen in a Change the wording
Another
cinema
. Correct your spelling
Over time
Overtime
, I completely believed that the Correct your spelling
Over time
cinema
could not be replaced by nothing
.
Rewrite the sentence
could not be replaced by anything
could be replaced by nothing
Firstly
, the information revolution over the past 20 years has been changing plenty of events surround
us. WhereasWrong verb form
surrounding
,
changing our Remove the comma
apply
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lifestyle
life style
might not be attended Correct your spelling
lifestyle
however
, it has been occurring. In fact, people who believe Add the comma(s)
,however
this
idea say every work which we could do by
the internet, we should give it up. On one hand, an argument is going to Change preposition
apply
cinema
is unnecessary and watching movies could be done on smart devices. Add an article
the cinema
For example
, this
group believe that watching movies is just enjoyable work
and it is not different where they do.
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to work
IT
revolution was not able to change Correct article usage
the IT
what
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their
they
Correct your spelling
the
interest
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were interest
.
It is indeed considered that people who love Change preposition
in.
cinema
could not give up going there anymore. While,
they believe to do so is Remove the comma
apply
an
Correct article usage
apply
entertainment
due to they absolutely love watching Replace the word
entertaining
Add an article
a movie
the movie
movie
in Fix the agreement mistake
movies
cinema
. Add an article
the cinema
a cinema
For instance
, it is considered in spite of Correct article usage
the developing
developing
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development
the
internet TV networks Change preposition
of the
on
these years, pupils are not getting rid of the Change preposition
in
cinema
. As a result
, it is Known
the Fix capitalization
known
cinema
has an especial
and unexpected enjoying which could not be experienced anywhere. Correct your spelling
special
In particular
, this
group love the cinema
in order to that is
part of art.
In conclusion, both groups have results which be correct but in my opinion
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,opinion
cinema
might not be replace
by anything because it is part of humanity’s history.Change the verb form
be replaced
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