The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I writing

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letter to bring to your attention the letter issued to demolish the historic building in the green venue area, I would like to give you suggestions on why that building is important for the local community. I was shocked to know about when it came to my knowledge that in the green venue area municipal corporation is going to demolish the historical building which belongs to freedom fighter

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, I think you will be mistaken if you will take

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step because with that you are not only going to break a lot of people's sentiments who really admire

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a great attraction to our city.

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building is built by

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father and he gave

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building to the government to make him live for a lifetime, we should not forget what

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did for our county.

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, it is salient to preserve

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building so, you should reconsider your decision and make the shopping mall in a different location, I am sure you will find a better place for that. The building which you are planning to demolish is the beauty of our city, it is the better source for the local community to learn about the

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. A lot of people around the world come here to visit the place so it

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helps the city with tourism. I am looking forward to a positive reply from your side. Your's faithfully Ankur Ahuja

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

251 words

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