The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

Dear Sir or Madam, I writing
this
letter to bring to your attention the letter issued to demolish the historic building in the green venue area, I would like to give you suggestions on why that building is important for the local community. I was shocked to know about when it came to my knowledge that in the green venue area municipal corporation is going to demolish the historical building which belongs to freedom fighter
Bhagat
Singh
.
Therefore
, I think you will be mistaken if you will take
this
step because with that you are not only going to break a lot of people's sentiments who really admire
Bhagat
Singh
but
also
a great attraction to our city.
This
building is built by
bhagat
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singh
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father and he gave
this
building to the government to make him live for a lifetime, we should not forget what
bhagat
singh
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did for our county.
Thus
, it is salient to preserve
this
building so, you should reconsider your decision and make the shopping mall in a different location, I am sure you will find a better place for that. The building which you are planning to demolish is the beauty of our city, it is the better source for the local community to learn about the
Bhagat
Singh
. A lot of people around the world come here to visit the place so it
also
helps the city with tourism. I am looking forward to a positive reply from your side. Your's faithfully Ankur Ahuja
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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