In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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At the present time, with the advancement of technology, it is predictable to increase the number of

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vehicles in the

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future. All people will be considered a passenger. In my point of view, the advantages of

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phenomenon, outweigh the disadvantages. I will discuss my reasons in the upcoming paragraphs. On the one hand, there will be some negative points, for

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phenomenon in the next decades.

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will be harmful to drivers’ economic situation.

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the fact, with

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transportation, people would not need any drivers for their transport. So, drivers will get out of their careers.

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, the system of the advanced

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may have some bugs.

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, passengers will be in danger of car accidents.

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. A number of them cannot relinquish obstacles in their path. So, it causes some essential threats to users’

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, there are some benefits of using

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new method of driving in the near future. The prominent reason is

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humans’ wrongs and clear their vital role

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in accidents. To clarify, people’s mistakes have the biggest role in many car accidents in the whole world. As

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, with

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cars

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, we will diminish

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issue with the improvement of the

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industry.

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without any doubt, in the near future,

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cars

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not use fuel or oil and they will be replaced by new energies

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as solar, hydrogen, and many other new methods.

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will have a harmful impression on the

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satisfaction of drivers,

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can improve the safety of roads.

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, it will be practical for having a clean environment and reducing the amount of pollution. I opine the merits of

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phenomenon will be more magnificent to compare with disadvantages.

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task response

Provide a more balanced analysis of the advantages and disadvantages of driverless vehicles. Ensure that the essay addresses all aspects of the topic.

coherence cohesion

Improve the organization and coherence of the essay by structuring paragraphs with clear topic sentences and using cohesive devices effectively.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

306 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

driverless vehicles
advantages
disadvantages
increased safety
reduced traffic congestion
improved efficiency
accessibility
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job displacement
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