Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

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while others think it

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to learn and study

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major

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. Physical lesson focus on exercise but other major lessons improve our understanding way the real-world work.

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essay will discuss both

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and give

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own opinion. While some believe that focusing more on physical education subject

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very crucial to

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. Playing sports in physical educations

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help improve

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children

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health.

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, many students who participated in their P.E

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have better health and good mental strength, because as they work out their body release a chemical that

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anxiety, we can see that many people who work out live longer than others that didn’t exercise.

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, physical education

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prolong our life and improve our

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healthy. The major lessons in school help us advance our knowledge. By teaching all the

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needed for applying

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in university.

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, chemistry

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teach students about chemicals and elements

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experience help student who is looking to apply

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job or university that required

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knowledge about chemicals

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not only apply to chemistry subject but

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subjects

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like business, astronomy, and biology classes.

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, advance and improve our understanding so we can use

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in the future. In conclusion, physical

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help us stay fit and healthy and

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lessons help advance our understanding and prepare us for the real world.

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, both of these

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are equally important to

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