The dangers and complexities of the modern world have made the mobile phone an absolute necessity for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The mobile phone has become very important in kids' lives as the world has
gone
digital and harder to live in Verb problem
become
coupled with
its cruelty. I strongly agree that a child needs a mobile computer to survive in this
modern world because of some reasons which include learning and obtaining information.
The first reason why a young person needs a mobile phone is because of learning. In this
new age, some course is being offered online and these young ones engage in that which help them to gain the necessary certificates to face the world when they become adults. For instance
, my younger brother was opportune to enrol in an information technology course with an online university, and now, he is able to use
the knowledge
to better himself and our family as he is able to sell his knowledge
for money online and help out in training of our younger ones. Therefore
, making use
of his handset has brought him and the entire family a good thing.
The second reason why children need to be allowed to make use
of computer sets at home is to enable them to have knowledge
about everything on the globe. There is so much news online which can be assessed using mobile phones and this
equipe
the young generations with the right data about Correct your spelling
equips
this
universe, and it helps them avoid dangers when it's happening. For example
, the news of insurgence in the northern states of Nigeria has been in the news online and most children assess them and hear of these broadcasts, hence
, they make their resolve on how to solve these issues on their own end by helping their parents make decisions that help the individual's family thus
saving their lives. Some juveniles act on some piece of data online, advising their elders on some important matters like vacating the land or emigrating so they can be saved in times of trouble.
In summary, it has become a very important need for a child to make use
of mobile computers in this
hard new age as there are insecurities everywhere. I strongly agree with that, due to
the fact that they learn from there and get the knowledge
that better their lives and those around them.Submitted by Nwokololucy on
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