Some people prefer to use energy-saving modes of transportation like hybrid cars and bicycles. Others prefer the usual mode of transportation like buses and trains because it is fast and efficient. Which mode of transportation do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Some individuals prefer to
use
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energy-efficient
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energy efficient
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energy-efficient
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modes of transportation like hybrid
cars
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and
bicycles
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however
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other individuals prefer to
use
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usual
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mode of transportation like
buses
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and
trains
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because it is fast and do not waste much
energy
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. İn my opinion, using hybrid
cars
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is better because it uses renewable
energy
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sources
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.
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, Electric is a renewable
source
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therefore
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using
electric
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in vehicles is a sensible
idea
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. But
fuel
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is not
renewable
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a renewable
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source
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people
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should abandon
buses
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.
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,
buses
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and
trains
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are working with
fuel
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.
Fuel
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have
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a bad influence
to
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the environment.
Fuel
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is not
a
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environmentally friendly
source
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. Research conducted by CNN revealed that using
buses
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is not make much sense because
its
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exhaust emits so
much
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many
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fumes
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.
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This
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fumes
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have a devastating effect on nature.
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,
Buses
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exhaust spread
fumes
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afterward
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. These
fumes
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get into
people
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's
body
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bodies
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İt will devastate our organs. But in hybrid
cars
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and
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bicycles
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bicycle
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,bicycle
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we can not see
same
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the same
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conclusion because they are
environmental
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environmentally
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friendly.
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, As for me using hybrid
cars
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and
bicycles
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are
brightful
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bright
idea
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.
Fuel
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sources
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might finish but electricity can not finish because electricity is a renewable
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sources
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source
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. Research conducted by CNBC revealed that
buses
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and
trains
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working
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work
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with
fuels
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fuel
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when
fuels
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fuel
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sources
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fiinished
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finished
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people'
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life influence badly.
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,
people
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should rely on renewable
sources
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like electricity.
Also
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using
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a bicycle
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bicycle
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bicycles
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is a tremendous
idea
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because we do not need to
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energy
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the energy
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source
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for
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ride
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a ride
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a bike. Abandoning
buses
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and
trains
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and using hybrid
cars
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is a pressing need in 21 century. İf
crowd
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the crowd
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want to reduce
to
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apply
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impact they should
use
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hybrid
cars
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or
bicycles
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. To conclude, using hybrid
cars
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and
bicycles
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is the best
idea
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.
People
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have to abandon harmful fuels and they have to
use
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renewable
sources
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.
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  • Maintenance costs
  • Flexibility
  • Versatile
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  • Congestion
  • Infrastructure
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