Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These days , many
people
decide to buy ready-made food because they do not like cooking. For
this
reason, ready
meals
have been spreading around the world. Nowadays, since
people
have to work for many hours during the day, they often decide to have dinner in a restaurant with their friends or relatives after they left the workplace.
Besides
this
, in case
people
want to stay with their families in the evening but they do not want to cook , they tend to purchase ready
meals
they find in supermarkets and grocery shops they usually go to. In fact , n convenience foods can
be derive
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from a great variety of food
such
as pasta, meat, vegetable and
also
fruit . Of course, when
people
are in the workplace , they usually go to eat something in a cafe'
in
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the
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lunch-time
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.
However
, numerous individuals choose to consume ready
meals
in the workplace, if ,of course, they are allowed to do it. Anyway, even if the purchase of
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ready- made
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food
tend
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to increase over the years, there are
also
many
people
who still love cooking for themselves and their family. For
this
reason
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famous cookers often write books and lead programs
TV
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where they explain to ordinary
people
how to cook delicious
meals
.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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