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In some countries owning a
rather than renting one is very important for citizens. In my perception,
is outrightly advantageous to a large extent. My inclination is explained with valid reasons and
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of all, The fundamental reason for my inclination is that
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For many
is an ocean of memories, and emotions,
it is a support for their
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, In
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believe that they should keep
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most of
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emotional, and precious memory
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one place,
. From
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birth to death they want to be in the same
where they have lived their every stage of
. Even if someone is away from
in their mid-age, for work, they want one place where they can spend their retirement.
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of bricks for them, It is the album of every
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of
, good-bad, happy-sad, laugh-cry, even
and death.
,
is an asset, which can help an individual in their difficult situations
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. In many countries like India, The
is a saviour of difficult times.
, In
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,
can sell or keep their
as
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,
thatCorrect pronoun usage
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will rescue them.
in
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, majorly
do
for
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childrenChange noun form
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education, and
functions.
, there are some negatives
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owning a
. Relocation is not easily possible. In
rentedAdd an article
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, relocation is so
and fast. For some
, Owning
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will come with
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of
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In conclusion, Though there are
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downsides, I strongly think that owning a
is a better choice for
. As
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and
a valuable asset.