In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

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In some countries owning a
house
rather than renting one is very important for citizens. In my perception,
this
is outrightly advantageous to a large extent. My inclination is explained with valid reasons and
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First
of all, The fundamental reason for my inclination is that
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For many
people
home
is an ocean of memories, and emotions,
Also
it is a support for their
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old-age
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For example
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india
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believe that they should keep
their
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emotional, and precious memory
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one place,
home
. From
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birth to death they want to be in the same
home
where they have lived their every stage of
life
. Even if someone is away from
home
in their mid-age, for work, they want one place where they can spend their retirement.
House
is not just a
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of bricks for them, It is the album of every
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of
life
, good-bad, happy-sad, laugh-cry, even
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marriage
marraige
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marriage
and death.
Furthermore
,
House
is an asset, which can help an individual in their difficult situations
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life
. In many countries like India, The
house
is a saviour of difficult times.
For instance
, In
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or bad financial
condition
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conditions
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,
people
can sell or keep their
home
as
mortgage
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,
that
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will rescue them.
Perticularly
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Particularly
in
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, majorly
people
do
this
for
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emergency
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emergencies
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,
children
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education, and
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marriage
marraige
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marriage
functions.
On the other hand
, there are some negatives
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owning a
home
. Relocation is not easily possible. In
rented
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house
, relocation is so
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convenient
convienent
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convenient
and fast. For some
people
, Owning
house
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will come with
burden
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the burden
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of
loan
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a loan
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. In conclusion, Though there are
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downsides, I strongly think that owning a
home
is a better choice for
people
. As
House
is part of
person's
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life
and
also
a valuable asset.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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