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People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living.

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Having
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 knowledge or the ability to speak and write , and read is considered a sure-shot way to get high-paying jobs .Well is it a reality or myth depends upon lots of factors like whether you belong to
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 speaking country or region , whether
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 is used
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 in your area. Maybe
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 is the
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 in your country .Let us discuss
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English
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 as a
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 is widely spoken around the globe . whether it's Europe , North America , Australia or Asia.
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 as a business
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 is widely spread . Even Hollywood makes movies in
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 .
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 as a
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 is taught in various countries in which its a secondary
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 China.
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 is because most corporates worldwide use it for communication and interaction between employees. ,
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 There are lots of other languages which are widely used and spoken ,
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, French , Spanish, German, Swahili etc. having knowledge of
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 is considered a skill. Which any individual has to acquire by learning it. For ,example French is considered a widely used
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 in France but in Canada is
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 used by a large section of the population in the province of Quebec. If you want a job in Quebec you must know french. To conclude
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 , having knowledge of
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 or being literate in
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 always opens doors to many opportunities across the globe . Countries like India are taking advantage of it. As a whole
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 industry and bpo industry creates high-paying job for young
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-speaking graduates. So I strongly agree with the statement that
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 literature has better opportunities for jobs across the globe and which paves way for a higher standard of living for them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • literate in English
  • global job opportunities
  • multinational companies
  • working language
  • educational opportunities
  • higher qualifications
  • job prospects
  • industries
  • technology, finance, healthcare
  • key skill
  • higher-paying jobs
  • proficiency
  • standard of living
  • facilitate immigration
  • remote working opportunities
  • income stability
  • non-English-speaking countries
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