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The crime rates nowadays are decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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At present,
people
 need
technology
 everywhere and it is playing an important role in all areas of the world. Some say that offences are declining due to advancements in
technology
 in comparison to the past times. I agree with
this
 statement because the awareness of social media and surveillance
cameras
 has contributed a lot to preventing criminal cases.
First
 of all, Social media is a good example of
technology
 in today's era. If something happens
people
 post that incident immediately on
the
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social platforms. So, in
this
 way
people
 are aware of criminals and crimes to a great extent.
For example
, in many countries, if there is a chance of theft or robbery, alert messages send to almost
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every phone.
Hence
,
people
 get ready to tackle that issue and it helps to send that criminal behind bars.
Second
 of all, Survellience
cameras
 are on every street, shop, and outside of houses as well. Before stealing
people
 think hundred of times due to the
cameras
 because they are afraid of prisons.
Moreover
, if anything happens
then
people
 check their
cameras
first
 and due to that , the facility they are able to reach the offenders very easily.
On the other hand
, due to
technology
such
 as TV, and serials,
people
 get ideas which help them to commit a crime. So,
this
 is a bad effect of advancement in
technology
.
Additionally
, it encourages
people
 towards crime because it makes it easy for them to tackle the police and methods to hide. In conclusion, in my opinion,
although
 both points have their own views
technology
 is being used in many ways to overcome crimes.
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