You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: • where you went • what you saw there • how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Rutuja, Hope you're, well. It's been a while since I

last

heard from you. Hope everything is good with you. I am writing

this

letter to let you know that after months of planning we took holidays in Paris. I am glad to say that it was one of the best vacations we had

this

year. On the

first

day ,we visited "La Louvre" which is the best museum in the world and every artist dreams to visit it at least once in a lifetime.We got completely mesmerized by looking at its glass pyramid structure and clicked more than fifty pictures there. It took us a half day to complete a tour of the museum, we started at the Sculpture hall and ended with famous European artists' paintings which are depicting the French Revolution. When we reached the end of one auditorium corner and found all the people's cameras in one direction. We understood that there is a world-class famous painting of "Mona Lisa". I can't be more amazed after my visit. We were astonished because we actually experienced everything we had heard about it. I am sending you guys a souvenir and attaching some pictures. I wish we take our

trip together to Paris and will plan to visit Disney Land as well. Let's catch up on your birthday. See you soon! Yours lovingly, Prajakta

Submitted by ppudhav.3 on Sun Oct 16 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

228 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph * Explain why you need that particular photograph * Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it
I hope you are great. It was a great pleasure that you forced me to come to Dubai with you on a relatively long journey. I’m writing to you to request a favor.
7.5
band
Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support.
A group of individuals present the view that one can be robbed anywhere, either on the streets or in their homes, whereas others believe that staying at home would be the safest way of not being robbed. I strongly agree with the former opinion.
6
band
Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that children's leisure time should be decided by their parents, while others believe that children should have the freedom to pick what activities they desire. This essay will examine both points of view and provide examples.
5.5
band
Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
These days, film is a hot topic which grabs a large amount of public attention. It is a common belief that the films' aim is solely entertainment while some hold the view that educational value should have been appeared in movies. From my perspective, I completely agree with the view that there should be lessons, in the films for several reasons.
8
band
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before.Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments.Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
With the advancements in medical science, the life span of human beings has increased in many developed nations.Although the long and healthy life of people is considered a symbol of a successful society, some folks consider the elderly population a burden on the country.They may be right to some extent but the early death of citizens is not at all a positive indicator for any nation-state.

You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: • where you went • what you saw there • how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words.

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Ask your friend to send you a particular photograph * Explain why you need that particular photograph * Tell your friend what happened to your copy of it

Some people are afraid to go out for fear of being robbed on the streets. Still, there are robberies that happen inside houses. What do you think is the best thing a person can do to ensure his/her own security? Use specific reasons and examples to support.

Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion.