In some culture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

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that anything can be achieved by trying hard enough, whereas others think that

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message has more negative effects on them.

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essay will discuss the drawbacks and advantages of

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statement. One of the disadvantages of

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method is the pressure put on

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by their

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and elders. In some countries,

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vigorously advocate

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that they will excel in their academic performances if they study day and night.

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puts enormous pressure on

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, which sometimes leads to them not achieving the expected results, and afterwards, they are often blamed by their

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for not studying hard enough.

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,

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get depressed and start behaving in an anti-social manner. Despite working hard when

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fail in a task multiple times, they sometimes do not receive the support of their

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or elders.

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, resulting in

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becoming depressed and developing aggressive behaviour towards society and its culture & norm because they feel being looked down upon by people due to their failure.

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negatively affects the mental health of

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, which can have a detrimental impact on their development in the future. The advantages of reinforcing

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positive message are many, with two being especially important: developing strong

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ethics and boosting self-confidence in

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. It is widely known that hard

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is the key to success. By creating

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habit in

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at an early age, they understand the value of hard

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and sacrifice to achieve something great in their lifetime, and continue with

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value as they progress in life. The other advantage is that it will enhance the self-confidence in

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to aim for higher goals and to

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hard to achieve

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since their self-belief system will always tell them that anything is possible. There are many examples of talented people who have achieved extraordinary fame and success and constantly reflect on the hard yard they put in when they were young (

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) to become exceptionally good at what they do. In conclusion,

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there are certain drawbacks of

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value which puts pressure on the

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affecting their mental state and development,

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, if proper support and guidance

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provided, it will have positive benefits for them in terms of their cognitive and skills development.