In past museums storged information about culture and history. However, nowadays this information can be found through internet. And, therefore, there is no need in museums. Do you agree or disagree?

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the old data and stories about old nation's culture and their history are very important to be stored properly nowadays, using technology

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as the internet can be stored but ,

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something inside

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information must be demonstrated to the reader so I partially agree with there is no reason to keep museum buildings.

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because the museum buildings are not the way to tell the past by reading and recalling the knowledge about the old notion only but there is still something inside the building that moves our feeling or touch our hearts to understand

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data which stored in the rocks

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as pyramids in Egypt, an old museum in Rome.

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,using new technology

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as light and sound effects inside these buildings helps to recall all the spirit of the glory of ancient ,the fall of nations and the adoption of changes through all ages.

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, I agree that using new technology for storing and recalling data is a very easy way and it will be viral through the internet

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anybody can get

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information about the place without visiting it. In the conclusion,partially agree with the idea of no need for museums is very complicated with the new modern life

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is going fast but ,

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there is a need to view the old nation's history and learn from the past.